February 25, 2012

Nature Insight: Side by Side

Posted in Art, Birds, Nature, Writing tagged , , , , , at 7:35 pm by bardessdmdenton

Copyright 2012 by DM Denton

Doves welcome the day

 side by side in place

 on the open sway

 of approaching spring.

No need to compete

 for such a small space

 or spoil the treat

 their cooing can bring.


No jealousy here

 or mention of fear,

 no pain to inflict–

 it’s peace they predict.


Writing note: I wrote this poem last night to go along with this painting. This morning I was standing by the large window that looks out on my patio and the bird feeders and there was a dove sitting on the ground staring at me! He stayed there for a long time looking up at the window…maybe or maybe not waiting for me to appear again. I like to think he was…

©Artwork and writing, unless otherwise indicated, are the property of Diane M Denton. Please request permission to reproduce or post elsewhere with a link back to bardessdmdenton. Thank you.

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36 Comments »

  1. Val said,

    Lovely! :)

  2. Your paintings are always beautiful, with such lively colors. And this poem is now my favorite of yours. :)

    • P.S. I love it that there was a dove looking up at you through the window this morning. Adds even more depth to your poem and painting!

      • Yes, it was quite a coincidence…a very delightful and affirming one! Thanks again.

    • So glad you enjoyed it, Betty! I always appreciate your visits and comments!

  3. Fergiemoto said,

    Oh, such lovely words! And I love the painting of the love birds. Small spaces can be much more enjoyable when shared together.

    • Thank you, Fergiemoto! I am glad you enjoyed it and that it offered a positive message to you.

  4. Savira said,

    In small spaces one can find complete contentment…

    • Hi Savira! Yes, I had to rescue your comment from spam. Of course, I’m glad I did for you offer a quite lovely interpretation.

  5. Savira said,

    Am not sure if my comment took….

  6. A joy, as always. I have sometimes wondered why the dove was chosen the symbol of peace, but your have illustrated beautifully how very well they can epitomise it :-)

    • Thank you, Laurel. Sometimes the simplest moments offer the most meaning. Thank you for your lovely comment!

  7. I love how you’ve caught slightly different expressions on the doves’ faces! Your painting has a style all of its own: so original. I love the colours in this one. I also really like the line, ‘on the open sway of approaching spring’. It sounds so lyrical and hopeful, somehow. Really lovely.

    • Thank you, BH! I’m so glad you found it hopeful (strange because it was born from frustration and even a little anger over someone—or two— trying to spoil the joy of accomplishment by throwing into an almost gladiatorial arena of competition).

      That’s why I love the arts…there’s always room for more!

  8. Your painting and poem are just lovely~
    Lauren :)

  9. Insightful indeed!! Humans have set the precedent for not sharing with those like us. Follow the birds, that’s what I say!
    Andrea xx

    • Yes, I actually loathe competition…I don’t think it makes the world a better place. Striving to do our best with good intentions is another thing entirely.

      Thank you so much, Andrea!

  10. granbee said,

    Bardess, that dove WAS waiting for you to sketch him! I love the bent limb as you sketched it. I love the different sized doves, with different body language and different shaped beaks. No, there never is any competition or jealousy where there is such peace! Wonderful lines! Bless you, dear bardess.

    • Yes, Granbee, I love when that happens…synchronicity that is!

      Thank you and blessings!

  11. I’m visiting from Val’s blog and am delighted to find your mourning dove painting and poem – so lovely – mourning doves have a special place in my heart as I associate them with messages from my mother, who died twenty years ago. Looking forward to exploring more of your blog!

    • Thank you so much for your visit, Barbara, and your heartfelt comment. I am so glad that my little post evoked something positive and spiritual to you. I am a believer that there are messengers all around us. Blessings!

  12. MaryEllen Carlo said,

    I’m quite sure that he was waiting for you! Birds are intuitive too – they are God’s creatures – just like we are!
    Beautiful painting and beautiful writing!

    • Yes, it was quite a coincidence…that wasn’t, I think. Thanks so much, MaryEllen!

  13. Thomas Davis said,

    We have doves that live around our house summer, fall, winter, and spring. They compete with the chickadees, pinion jays, and plethoria of birds that visit Ethel’s daily restaurants filled with seed, but both the ring necked and inca doves serenade every day and enrich the life in our small piece of New Mexico with a peace that emanates equally from this poem. The drawing and the poem, as usual, helps make this day.

    • Thank you, Thomas, for such a lovely interesting comment. I love when there is a sharing of nature’s stories and insights. I’m so glad my poem and illustration brought some peace into your day!

  14. Caddo Veil said,

    Hi, lovey! I’ve given you the Soul-Song Award for this poem–it’s wonderful, and clearly blessed by the appearance of your dove! Visit my blog for more info–but there are no demanding rules. God bless you muchly.

    • Thank you for this special award, Caddo! It is one of my favorites and I feel something very positive when one of my posts seems fit for it. Blessings to you!

  15. Bodhirose said,

    I love those sweet birds…your poem perfectly describes their peaceful demeanor. Your painting is so charming and I like that one of the birds was checking you out through the window…I wonder what he was thinking…

    • Thank you, Bodhirose! Yes, it was quite haunting that the Dove’s attention was focused on me soon after posting the poem and illustration. There are no coincidences!

  16. a favourite bird! love your art so much! The poem is perfect

  17. Ina said,

    Hi Diane
    what a lovely poem and image, I love the doves. They are such loyal partners too! :)


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