When the leaves turn colors the wind turns cold and brings them down. But I’ve already raked that over, finding fruit among what’s fallen.
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I like the optimism in this, considering how autumn often paints a picture of loneliness and loss. But I think autumn is beautiful, and your poem shows that you find beauty in it, too.
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I am glad you found optimism in my post…I always try to offer something positive, even in the face of what might seem otherwise. I agree that autumn is beautiful, a winding down, a pulling in that winter will purify and inspire.
Thanks so much for your visit and comment, and for directing me to your blog where I have already found some treasures.
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Simply delightful!
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Thanks so much, Laurel! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Such a very beautiful poem and illustration!
The squirrel looks quite proud, at the same time very content.
And I particularly like the really clever title!
Christine
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Thanks, Christine! I am glad you enjoyed it. Squirrels seem to be very self-satisfying creatures!
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Your writing is simply beautiful – it just flows and flows and I visualize everything as I’m reading. Keep up the great work!
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Thanks so much, MaryEllen. I so appreciate your visit and kind comment!
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Lovely. Two seasons all in one.
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Thanks so much, Val! Glad you are back!
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Darling – especially the cunning title!
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Thank you! (Yes, the title is a little manipulative…I originally had ‘Fruitfulness’ but it ‘begged me to play with it more…)
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Made me smile.. I love looking at squirrels
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Thanks! Yes, squirrels–those mischievous clownish creatures…maddening and yet so entertaining…
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Wonderful! It always seems a minor miracle to me that so much can be said in so few words. (Of course, I love the picture too.) This is, in itself, a found treasure, much like the hidden fruit. I tweeted it.
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Thank you! That’s the secret of a writer’s art, I think, a few words being enough even as they make many. Thanks for tweeting! Enjoy the hidden fruit of your day!
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I would love to just get past the first layer of leaves! Enjoyed your poem, and for me it means that I will get to the end of it, and then I can settle in for a long winter’s nap. Have a good one!
Cindi
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Thanks, Cindy! Glad you enjoyed it. I too am looking forward to my winter’s hibernation…which means more time for writing and napping! Enjoy the day!
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Ohhhh…that’s so cute!
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.
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